Title: FEAR
By: Raihan Irham R.
PART 1
The moon is right there high in the sky. Two men walking down the street, talking to each other. It was one of them, Bonnie, who is a little bit paranoid, talking about what he feels that night.
Bonnie: Mark, I'm scared.
Mark: The fuck? Your paranoia hits you again?
Bonnie: It feels like someone is watching me. [Looking the back] Following us.
Mark: Shut up. There's no one or nothing that's following us.
Bonnie: But the feel is real!
Mark: DON'T ACT LIKE A KID. NOW SHUT UP!
Then, he shut his mouth. Realizing Bonnie's paranoia is going to out of control, he talks about another thing. Something that they likes.
So Bonnie won't remember his feeling of someone following 'em.
Or he was right.
Something's following.
***
The story continued. Bonnie came home safely. Mark has arrived on his home too.
Bonnie live alone. He's tired. His paranoia is consuming his energy.
So Bonnie lay on his bed. He was going to take a sleeping pills when he saw something.
It was someone standing behind the window. It was covered. So he only sees shadow.
The man is standing there. No movement. He just standing there.
Bonnie was too afraid that he can't even move his body. Only his hand reaching the phone.
Mark: I was trying to sleep, what the heck man! Why are you calling me in midnight?
Bonnie: There is somebody, Mark. Help me.
Mark: The fuck? Your paranoia again? Calm your tits down.
Bonnie: NO! IT IS NOT MY PARANOIA! I SEE HIM, STANDING IN FRONT OF THE WINDOW, WITH A KNIFE ON HIS HANDS!
Mark: What the fuck? I'm calling the police right now!
The man was screeching the window.
Bonnie: DID YOU HEAR THAT! I THINK HE IS GOING TO BROKE IN!
Mark: GO! GO AWAY NOW! HIDE SOMEWHERE IN YOUR HOUSE AND KEEP THE PHONE WITH YOU!
So Bonnie, run into the kitchen. He was trying to go inside a cabinet.
Then Mark hear a mess, things fallen, and a scream. Bonnie says something while choking.
Bonnie: I ... was ... right. It ... is ... coming.
It was too late.
***
Bonnie died. He was stabbed right on his throat. Police still have no idea the hell was going on. No fingerprints. No clue. Nothing.
Mark, on the other side, regreted that he has ignored his bestfriend. He feels that he is not a good listener. He thought it was his mistake.
Mark: It was my mistake, Annie.
Annie: No. Nobody would have predicted this thing to happen.
Mark: HE FELT IT! He says somebody is following us. I IGNORED IT! I thought it was only his paranoia. BUT I WAS WRONG! I SHOULD HAVE LISTENED HIM!
Annie: Don't blame yourself.
Mark: I have no one now.
Annie: I'm still here.
Mark look at Annie and cried. She hugged him just to make him comfortable. Mark cry as loud as he can. Annie hugged him tighter just so Mark feels that he is not alone.
Annie: Everybody has a regret.
TO BE CONTINUED.
By: Raihan Irham R.
PART 1
The moon is right there high in the sky. Two men walking down the street, talking to each other. It was one of them, Bonnie, who is a little bit paranoid, talking about what he feels that night.
Bonnie: Mark, I'm scared.
Mark: The fuck? Your paranoia hits you again?
Bonnie: It feels like someone is watching me. [Looking the back] Following us.
Mark: Shut up. There's no one or nothing that's following us.
Bonnie: But the feel is real!
Mark: DON'T ACT LIKE A KID. NOW SHUT UP!
Then, he shut his mouth. Realizing Bonnie's paranoia is going to out of control, he talks about another thing. Something that they likes.
So Bonnie won't remember his feeling of someone following 'em.
Or he was right.
Something's following.
***
The story continued. Bonnie came home safely. Mark has arrived on his home too.
Bonnie live alone. He's tired. His paranoia is consuming his energy.
So Bonnie lay on his bed. He was going to take a sleeping pills when he saw something.
It was someone standing behind the window. It was covered. So he only sees shadow.
The man is standing there. No movement. He just standing there.
Bonnie was too afraid that he can't even move his body. Only his hand reaching the phone.
Mark: I was trying to sleep, what the heck man! Why are you calling me in midnight?
Bonnie: There is somebody, Mark. Help me.
Mark: The fuck? Your paranoia again? Calm your tits down.
Bonnie: NO! IT IS NOT MY PARANOIA! I SEE HIM, STANDING IN FRONT OF THE WINDOW, WITH A KNIFE ON HIS HANDS!
Mark: What the fuck? I'm calling the police right now!
The man was screeching the window.
Bonnie: DID YOU HEAR THAT! I THINK HE IS GOING TO BROKE IN!
Mark: GO! GO AWAY NOW! HIDE SOMEWHERE IN YOUR HOUSE AND KEEP THE PHONE WITH YOU!
So Bonnie, run into the kitchen. He was trying to go inside a cabinet.
Then Mark hear a mess, things fallen, and a scream. Bonnie says something while choking.
Bonnie: I ... was ... right. It ... is ... coming.
It was too late.
***
Bonnie died. He was stabbed right on his throat. Police still have no idea the hell was going on. No fingerprints. No clue. Nothing.
Mark, on the other side, regreted that he has ignored his bestfriend. He feels that he is not a good listener. He thought it was his mistake.
Mark: It was my mistake, Annie.
Annie: No. Nobody would have predicted this thing to happen.
Mark: HE FELT IT! He says somebody is following us. I IGNORED IT! I thought it was only his paranoia. BUT I WAS WRONG! I SHOULD HAVE LISTENED HIM!
Annie: Don't blame yourself.
Mark: I have no one now.
Annie: I'm still here.
Mark look at Annie and cried. She hugged him just to make him comfortable. Mark cry as loud as he can. Annie hugged him tighter just so Mark feels that he is not alone.
Annie: Everybody has a regret.
TO BE CONTINUED.
